From 22f2404da2b10e4ce5b000072b961315da7a32f4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Mark Craig <mark.craig@forgerock.com>
Date: Tue, 17 Jan 2012 14:37:34 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Edit review on some preface text

---
 opendj3/src/main/docbkx/install-guide/preface.xml |   18 ++++++++----------
 1 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

diff --git a/opendj3/src/main/docbkx/install-guide/preface.xml b/opendj3/src/main/docbkx/install-guide/preface.xml
index 2838242..1c3c1e6 100644
--- a/opendj3/src/main/docbkx/install-guide/preface.xml
+++ b/opendj3/src/main/docbkx/install-guide/preface.xml
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
   !
   ! CCPL HEADER END
   !
-  !      Copyright 2011 ForgeRock AS
+  !      Copyright 2011-2012 ForgeRock AS
   !
 -->
 <preface xml:id='preface'
@@ -124,15 +124,13 @@
   <para>Fully baked core documentation is available at <link
   xlink:href='http://...'>...</link>.</para>
 
-  <para>You need not wait until the core documentation is finished, though,
-  to read more about OpenDJ, and also to read about related topics that
-  involve OpenDJ without being strictly about OpenDJ. The <link
-  xlink:href='https://wikis.forgerock.org/confluence/display/OPENDJ'
-  >OpenDJ Wiki</link> regularly brings you more, fresh content. In addition,
-  you are welcome to <link
-  xlink:href='https://idp.forgerock.org/openam/UI/Login?service=register'
-  >sign up</link> and then edit the Wiki if you notice an error, or if you
-  have something to share.</para>
+  <para>The <link xlink:show="new"
+  xlink:href="https://wikis.forgerock.org/confluence/display/OPENDJ">OpenDJ
+  Wiki</link> regularly brings you more, fresh content. In addition, you are
+  welcome to <link xlink:show="new"
+  xlink:href="https://idp.forgerock.org/openam/UI/Login?service=register">sign
+  up</link> and then edit the Wiki if you notice an error, or if you have
+  something to share.</para>
  </section>
 
  <section>

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