From b7969a56cadeec6f927139d840af5dd5049a1cd5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Mark Craig <mark.craig@forgerock.com>
Date: Fri, 15 Feb 2013 14:19:30 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Editorial updates

---
 opendj3/src/main/docbkx/release-notes/chap-feedback.xml |   41 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++----------
 1 files changed, 31 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

diff --git a/opendj3/src/main/docbkx/release-notes/chap-feedback.xml b/opendj3/src/main/docbkx/release-notes/chap-feedback.xml
index a66877b..ba7eeea 100644
--- a/opendj3/src/main/docbkx/release-notes/chap-feedback.xml
+++ b/opendj3/src/main/docbkx/release-notes/chap-feedback.xml
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
   !
   ! CCPL HEADER END
   !
-  !      Copyright 2011 ForgeRock AS
+  !      Copyright 2011-2013 ForgeRock AS
   !    
 -->
 <chapter xml:id='chap-feedback'
@@ -33,14 +33,14 @@
 
  <para>If you have questions regarding OpenDJ which are not answered by the
  documentation, there is a mailing list which can be found at
- <link xlink:href='https://lists.forgerock.org/mailman/listinfo/opendj'
- >https://lists.forgerock.org/mailman/listinfo/opendj</link> where you are
- likely to find an answer.</para>
+ <link xlink:href="https://lists.forgerock.org/mailman/listinfo/opendj"
+ xlink:show="new">https://lists.forgerock.org/mailman/listinfo/opendj</link>
+ where you are likely to find an answer.</para>
 
  <para>If you have found issues or reproducible bugs within OpenDJ
- <?eval ${docTargetVersion}?>, report them in <link
- xlink:href='https://bugster.forgerock.org'
- >https://bugster.forgerock.org</link>.</para>
+ <?eval ${docTargetVersion}?>, report them in the <link xlink:show="new"
+ xlink:href="https://bugster.forgerock.org/jira/browse/OPENDJ">OpenDJ issue
+ tracker</link>.</para>
 
  <para>When requesting help with a problem, please include the following
  information:</para>
@@ -51,9 +51,30 @@
    its impact on your operation</para>
   </listitem>
   <listitem>
-   <para>Machine type, operating system version, web container and version,
-   Java version, and OpenDJ release version, including any patches or other
-   software that might be affecting the problem</para>
+   <para>Description of the environment, including the following information:</para>
+   <itemizedlist>
+    <listitem>
+     <para>Machine type</para>
+    </listitem>
+    <listitem>
+     <para>Operating system &amp; version</para>
+    </listitem>
+    <listitem>
+     <para>Storage type &amp; version</para>
+    </listitem>
+    <listitem>
+     <para>Java version</para>
+    </listitem>
+    <listitem>
+     <para>Web container &amp; version (if applicable)</para>
+    </listitem>
+    <listitem>
+     <para>OpenDJ release version</para>
+    </listitem>
+    <listitem>
+     <para>Any patches or other software that might be affecting the problem</para>
+    </listitem>
+   </itemizedlist>
   </listitem>
   <listitem>
    <para>Steps to reproduce the problem</para>

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