From ecb103f8d9f0c3fcf006f2523bf8abe1e6672bed Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Mark Craig <mark.craig@forgerock.com>
Date: Tue, 26 Feb 2013 10:26:56 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Implement review suggestion from Jean-Noel Rouvignac

---
 opendj-sdk/opendj3/src/main/docbkx/dev-guide/chap-controls.xml |    7 ++++---
 1 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/opendj-sdk/opendj3/src/main/docbkx/dev-guide/chap-controls.xml b/opendj-sdk/opendj3/src/main/docbkx/dev-guide/chap-controls.xml
index 85a6b3e..660f8e8 100644
--- a/opendj-sdk/opendj3/src/main/docbkx/dev-guide/chap-controls.xml
+++ b/opendj-sdk/opendj3/src/main/docbkx/dev-guide/chap-controls.xml
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
   !
   ! CCPL HEADER END
   !
-  !      Copyright 2011-2012 ForgeRock AS
+  !      Copyright 2011-2013 ForgeRock AS
   !    
 -->
 <chapter xml:id='chap-controls'
@@ -333,8 +333,9 @@
   </indexterm>
 
   <para>Your application can attach the GetEffectiveRights request control to
-  a search in order to determine what access a user has to perform operations
-  on entries found. See the Internet-Draft on the <link xlink:show="new"
+  retrieve information about what the directory server permits a user to do.
+  Use this control during a search to see permissions on the entries returned.
+  See the Internet-Draft on the <link xlink:show="new"
   xlink:href="http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ldapext-acl-model">Access
   Control Model for LDAP</link> for background.</para>
 

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